Mock Up To Be Marked To Improve

This is my semi-final CD cover, to improve this futhur I need peer evaluation so please leave constructive comments on various aspects as there are the main points of composition:-

1. Composition of the photograph.

2.Mise-On-Scene (Colours used , font, costumes).

On this Semi-Final Draft i used stereotypical elements such as :-

1.Barcode

2.Track List

However I used some subvert methods such as :-

1. Central feature of the picture and font.

2.Colours , pink subvert to the colours in the photo.

3. Direction of the photos focal point.

Poster Mock Ups

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During making the bellow serious of mock ups i used a variation of differences :-

1.Colour differences in the title.

2.Varying Complexities.

3.Challenging conventions and keeping to stereotypes.

4.Changing the positioning of the band members.

5.Changing Mise-on-scene (colours, dress, location)

6.Main Focus of the shot

7.Layout (eg. Central, left hand side, right hand side).

Now I have created my mock ups i require peer evaluation to develop my ideas further, to create a product fit for my target audience. So please give constructive criticism using the pointers above.

CD Back Cover Mock Ups

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During making the bellow serious of mock ups i used a variation of differences :-

1.Colour differences in the title.

2.Varying Complexities.

3.Challenging conventions and keeping to stereotypes.

4.Changing the positioning of the band members.

5.Changing Mise-on-scene (colours, dress, location)

6.Main Focus of the shot

7.Layout (eg. Central, left hand side, right hand side).

Now I have created my mock ups i require peer evaluation to develop my ideas further, to create a product fit for my target audience. So please give constructive criticism using the pointers above.

(210mm/297mm)

CD Cover Mock Ups (Stage One)

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During making the bellow serious of mock ups i used a variation of differences :-

1. Colour differences in the title.
2. Varying Complexities.
3. Challenging conventions and keeping to stereotypes.
4. Changing the positioning of the band members.
5. Changing mise-on-scene (colours,dress,location)
6. Main Focus of the shot
7. Layout (eg.Central, left hand side, right hand side).
   
   

Now i have created my mock ups i require peer evaluation to develop my ideas further, to create a product fit for my target audience.So please give constructive criticism using the pointers above.

12cm x 12cm Front

Final Video Cut - Changes That Need To Be Made To Submit Project.

The final cut will be altered on the basis of these cretics :-
1.To shorten the drumming time of one particular character as it exceeds the 3 minute rule.
2. To improve the stability of the first 20 seconds of live action for camera stability.
3. Add some life action at the end of the film to add intertexuality and to the story of the song.
eg.
Opening of a door into party
People dancing (celebration)
Car driving off at the start to car pulling up.

Music Video Progress:- Demonstrated By Numerous Drafts and Evaluation

Bellow is a series of rough cuts of my composition of my music video to enable you to see the progression of my project and the different layers it comprises of . Therefore seeing the elements added and there effect upon the videos effect on my target audience.From this I desire for evaluation and constructive criticism to enable me to produce my final cut which compliments the song well and is professional in appearance in terms of life action , stop motion and story telling.

(Please document the noticeable change between each cut and the tweaks made and make a note of the elements / shots which are effective and those that hinder the project.)

Draft One - Rough Cut

Rough Cut Two

Rough Cut Three

Rough Cut Four -This cut has up to 5 minutes of complete footage, I shall use in my final project so this is the cut I desire the most feedback on a number of factors from composition,Mise-on-scene to editing and lighting to enable me to make the best final project i can.

Also take into account the variation of shots i use,there length and its effectiveness or hindrance.

The Rough cuts present above demonstrate my progression why making my music video due to technical difficulties such as blogger crashing why uploading videos and filtering.I completed my coursework correct to my 1st December 2009 deadline but wasn't able to post them until 9th December when the technical difficulties were corrected and this is reflected in my schedule.

Schedule 3

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Pactice of First 20 Seconds Of Filming - Introduction To Music Video (Live Action)

Bellow is an anamatic of my proposed first 12 seconds of filming in which I intend to be in life action descending into stop motion in a storyboard form converted into an anamatic to give a visual representation of what I desire to achieve.

Bellow is my practice version of the first 12 seconds of filming working of my storyboard to test it's composition and effectiveness and possibility of being incorporated.

Please feel free to make comments and recommendations for improvements. Thank you

Improvements I have devised into a number of sections

1. 0-4 seconds key into the ignition

Positives

• Very Steady Camera
• Fluent

Negatives

• One single shot type

2.4-7 seconds CD touch the CD player

Positives

• Correct and effective shot type.
• Lighting is bright and effective.

Negative

• Shaky and unstable camera which is detrimental and shows incompetence.

3.8 Seconds Foot on Clutch

Positives

• Good lighting
• Good Camera positioning.

Negatives

• Mise-on-scene (shoes aren't compatible with storyline)

4.8-11 Gear Change

Positives

• Smooth Action
• Good Camera positioning
• Point of View Shot

Negatives

• Unstable camera angle ,which is detrimental to the quality of film.

5.11-12 Rev counter

Positives

• Good camera quality
• Steady shot

Negative

• Shot is very short.