Bellow is an anamatic of my proposed first 12 seconds of filming in which I intend to be in life action descending into stop motion in a storyboard form converted into an anamatic to give a visual representation of what I desire to achieve.
Bellow is my practice version of the first 12 seconds of filming working of my storyboard to test it's composition and effectiveness and possibility of being incorporated.
Please feel free to make comments and recommendations for improvements. Thank you
Improvements I have devised into a number of sections
1. 0-4 seconds key into the ignition
Positives
- Very Steady Camera
- Fluent
Negatives
- One single shot type
2.4-7 seconds CD touch the CD player
Positives
- Correct and effective shot type.
- Lighting is bright and effective.
Negative
- Shaky and unstable camera which is detrimental and shows incompetence.
3.8 Seconds Foot on Clutch
Positives
- Good lighting
- Good Camera positioning.
Negatives
- Mise-on-scene (shoes aren't compatible with storyline)
4.8-11 Gear Change
Positives
- Smooth Action
- Good Camera positioning
- Point of View Shot
Negatives
- Unstable camera angle ,which is detrimental to the quality of film.
5.11-12 Rev counter
Positives
- Good camera quality
- Steady shot
Negative
- Shot is very short.
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