Third Draft Of Final Products In Terms Of Progression

These are Three of my designed inside selves for posters on the inside sleeve:














I now require audience feedback to decide which is most:

1. Aesthetically pleasing
2. Most appropriate for purpose.
3. Most attractive and liked by my target audience.
4. Uses a different shot type than that of my cover and back cover of my Digi-Pack.
5. Which design is most authentic yet original at the same time?

Please leave comments and suggestions in terms of these target questions above as it will enable me to produce a more effective product which is direct to my target audience not my own personal preference or use the Questionnaire bellow which have more promotes.

Media Studies A2 Advanced Portfolio Questionaire Review On Promotionl Products Four

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This is my first mock up of my inside sleeve and CD spine, however I am not entirely happy with there outcome as I believe there is a missing element on both products yet desire input to improve this,so please leave your suggestions bellow.

The main criticisms were applicable to both products:-

1. There is a lack of the presence of the unique selling point of the product , the Lego men.
2. There isn't enough information on the inside sleeve to be sustainable for the coloured lines to compensate.
3. The right hand corner of the inner sleeve needs something interesting eg. Lego to distract away from the empty space.

Positives

1. Clever use of intertextuality eg. the logo, the coloured lines inspired from the logo.
2. The typeface size is in proportion for both products and is clear.
3. The information is useful and necessary to such products.
4. The colours used are bright and exciting and reflect the genre of the music.
   

Media Studies A2 Advanced Portfolio Questionaire Review On Promotionl Products Three

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Second Draft Of Final Products To Show Progression and Use of Audience Advice.

Front Cover Changes Made :

As you can see I have made the daft punk logo more of a centre piece and used the aid of colour to do this from the inspiration from thew colour of the typeface.I then applied a tapper to certain strands of the disjointed titles and this gave a more dramatic look and which was more appealing to the audience and grabbed there attention.

Back cover Changes Made :

I again used the same use of diagonal boxes and colours to create a centre piece
Poster and Changes made :

Media Studies A2 Advanced Portfolio Questionaire Review On Promotionl Products Review Two

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I used the Questionnaire above to see the level of progression and my audiences opinion on the work I have made in terms of there criticism.On suggestion was that a spine and inside poster should be created so that is what I am working on at the moment an a description of the reasons for changes I have made are above.

Final CD Back - Mock Up For Progression

Media Studies A2 Advanced Portfolio Questionaire Review On Promotionl Products One

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This is my semi-final CD cover, to improve this further I need peer evaluation so please leave constructive comments on various aspects as there are the main points of composition:-

1. Composition of the photograph.

2.Mise-On-Scene (Colours used , font,costumes).

On this Semi-Final Draft ,I have used the information obtained from my question to summarise that,i used stereotypical elements such as :-

1.Bar code

2.Track List

However i used some subvert methods such as :-

1. Central feature of the picture and font.

2.Colours , pink subvert to the colours in the photo.

3.Direction of the photos focal point.

Final Single Poster- For Deveolpment

This is my semi-final CD cover, to improve this futhur I need peer evaluation so please leave constructive comments on various aspects as there are the main points of composition:-

1. Composition of the photograph.

2.Mise-On-Scene (Colours used , font, costumes).

On this Semi-Final Draft I used stereotypical elements such as :-

1.Barcode

2.Track List

However I used some subvert methods such as :-

1. Central feature of the picture and font.

2.Colours , pink subvert to the colours in the photo.

3.Direction of the photos focal point.

Mock Up To Be Marked To Improve

This is my semi-final CD cover, to improve this futhur I need peer evaluation so please leave constructive comments on various aspects as there are the main points of composition:-

1. Composition of the photograph.

2.Mise-On-Scene (Colours used , font, costumes).

On this Semi-Final Draft i used stereotypical elements such as :-

1.Barcode

2.Track List

However I used some subvert methods such as :-

1. Central feature of the picture and font.

2.Colours , pink subvert to the colours in the photo.

3. Direction of the photos focal point.

Poster Mock Ups

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During making the bellow serious of mock ups i used a variation of differences :-

1.Colour differences in the title.

2.Varying Complexities.

3.Challenging conventions and keeping to stereotypes.

4.Changing the positioning of the band members.

5.Changing Mise-on-scene (colours, dress, location)

6.Main Focus of the shot

7.Layout (eg. Central, left hand side, right hand side).

Now I have created my mock ups i require peer evaluation to develop my ideas further, to create a product fit for my target audience. So please give constructive criticism using the pointers above.

CD Back Cover Mock Ups

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During making the bellow serious of mock ups i used a variation of differences :-

1.Colour differences in the title.

2.Varying Complexities.

3.Challenging conventions and keeping to stereotypes.

4.Changing the positioning of the band members.

5.Changing Mise-on-scene (colours, dress, location)

6.Main Focus of the shot

7.Layout (eg. Central, left hand side, right hand side).

Now I have created my mock ups i require peer evaluation to develop my ideas further, to create a product fit for my target audience. So please give constructive criticism using the pointers above.

(210mm/297mm)

CD Cover Mock Ups (Stage One)

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During making the bellow serious of mock ups i used a variation of differences :-

1. Colour differences in the title.
2. Varying Complexities.
3. Challenging conventions and keeping to stereotypes.
4. Changing the positioning of the band members.
5. Changing mise-on-scene (colours,dress,location)
6. Main Focus of the shot
7. Layout (eg.Central, left hand side, right hand side).
   
   

Now i have created my mock ups i require peer evaluation to develop my ideas further, to create a product fit for my target audience.So please give constructive criticism using the pointers above.

12cm x 12cm Front

Final Video Cut - Changes That Need To Be Made To Submit Project.

The final cut will be altered on the basis of these cretics :-
1.To shorten the drumming time of one particular character as it exceeds the 3 minute rule.
2. To improve the stability of the first 20 seconds of live action for camera stability.
3. Add some life action at the end of the film to add intertexuality and to the story of the song.
eg.
Opening of a door into party
People dancing (celebration)
Car driving off at the start to car pulling up.

Music Video Progress:- Demonstrated By Numerous Drafts and Evaluation

Bellow is a series of rough cuts of my composition of my music video to enable you to see the progression of my project and the different layers it comprises of . Therefore seeing the elements added and there effect upon the videos effect on my target audience.From this I desire for evaluation and constructive criticism to enable me to produce my final cut which compliments the song well and is professional in appearance in terms of life action , stop motion and story telling.

(Please document the noticeable change between each cut and the tweaks made and make a note of the elements / shots which are effective and those that hinder the project.)

Draft One - Rough Cut

Rough Cut Two

Rough Cut Three

Rough Cut Four -This cut has up to 5 minutes of complete footage, I shall use in my final project so this is the cut I desire the most feedback on a number of factors from composition,Mise-on-scene to editing and lighting to enable me to make the best final project i can.

Also take into account the variation of shots i use,there length and its effectiveness or hindrance.

The Rough cuts present above demonstrate my progression why making my music video due to technical difficulties such as blogger crashing why uploading videos and filtering.I completed my coursework correct to my 1st December 2009 deadline but wasn't able to post them until 9th December when the technical difficulties were corrected and this is reflected in my schedule.

Schedule 3

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